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da ([personal profile] da) wrote2006-08-17 10:49 am
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The Pitch


Date: Thu, 17 Aug 2006 07:52:55 -0500
From: Peter Butler <kxj@eyelovemuff.somewhere>
To: cs-everybody@work
Subject: diet

You are so breezy and Western and uninhibited.
Then, shatteringly, came the embarrassment in the hall. I could not
conceivably be scared by you or anybody else!
[...]


Pitched to: The BBC.

The Title: Tehran Confidential

The Premise: Sitcom based in an Iranian high-school. In the first episode, two juniors in love, Seyyed and Debbie, battle their parents, teachers, and overly sanctimonious classmates to find time alone together. Then comes the shocker: Debbie is really in love with Hassan, a senior! Seyyed pours his heart out in the finale, and onlooking classmates realize how much they have to learn.

Extra points for westernisms the audience doesn't notice but anyone from Iran would find ludicrous, à la Memoirs of a Gaisha. Super-bonus for the number of Americans who foam at the mouth thinking it's too sympathetic and try to boycott Britian. Triple bonus if the series lasts until Hassan comes out as gay.

[identity profile] melted-snowball.livejournal.com 2006-08-17 08:47 pm (UTC)(link)
You missed this line...

"She was a thin scabbardin her fawn suit and tight white turban."

[identity profile] da-lj.livejournal.com 2006-08-17 08:57 pm (UTC)(link)
I guess I did. Want to be my co-writer?

We'll do lunch.

(Anonymous) 2006-08-21 12:38 am (UTC)(link)
You crack me up!

Tom D.